Essay
How does this essay fulfill the requirements of our class essay for this unit (or not)?
The essay high crafts the essence of the class unit which is in relevance to human psychology and mental illness. The writer explains the outstanding personality of a woman who has lost her job and husband possesses. It is interesting to learn that there is a category of people called the happy extroverts who seems to face the bull by its horns. Unlike the mother, the son wallows in the valley of depression thus fail to handle life challenges amicably. He is scientifically defined as dysthymic which is a condition for depression and trauma after a low loss in life. The write-up majors of hyperthymia in correspondence to the class unit as a disease which in real life, is seen as a normal state of being always happy.
- How did you like this essay?
The essay is clear of grammatical error, narrative, and informative at the same time. I feel that it can be easily read and its understanding has a wide range of audiences. The punctuation is standard and the write is very elaborative when explaining the three scenarios of two mental disorders. I would confess that the write up is sequential because the author intricates one illness after the other. For instance, he explains hyperthymia which examples then narrows down to dysthymia. I also like the essay because it is objective. the writer makes an impartial conclusion with relevant shreds of evidences.
- What could the writer improve on to make this essay stronger?
The writer can improve on the essay stronger by using the intext citation and references to make the work easier for the reader. Additionally, the definition of terms such as dysthymia and hyperthymia is necessary because such stupendous writing attracts all walks of life. It means that the audience may unnecessarily be science-oriented.
- Is there anything you can borrow from this essay (in the way of writing style, organization, and so on) that you could use in your essay writing?
The essay has a marvelous organization inclusive of the introduction, body, and conclusion. The body is informative with the use of examples to clear out facts. the formal use of language is worth to be reckoned. I can borrow the descriptive, narrative, and creative writing styles from the essay. The writer uses a descriptive style of writing to create images of how hyperthymia looks through imagination.
References
Friedman, R. (2002). Born to be happy, through a twist of human hard wire. The New York Times.