Dispute Department
Dear dispute Department,
The instructions read: “Feel free to “edit” or “create” based off information provided.”
The provided information would have only offered less than 2 pages. The client had granted me the opportunity of getting creative and base the essay on the offered information. As a result, I had to remain as creative as possible while rearranging the provided draft. As in the final product, the statement about “enjoying watching television shows” was during the childhood stage after the hospital admission. Hence, the “juvenile statement” fits for a reflection from the scholar’s early life. As a child, the client was not a nurse but a juvenile undecided of the career path. Hence, at the moment, he/she was arguing, thinking, and acting like a child.
An admission essay is a reflective account, including the events that inspired one to pursue a given career. Watching movies or even role-plays can be part of the primary motivators for a profession. Hence, I beg to disagree with the client, as I wrote as per the provided guidelines.
Regards,