Elevator pitch
Do you know that approximately 42% of Americans are suffering from related dietary ailments like obesity due to the consumption of heavily processed foods and gluten? We at Grab a Smoothie intend to reduce these surging numbers by introducing healthy, beneficial smoothie products in the market so that we safeguard our people. Our smoothie brands are made from purely organic ingredients that are healthy and refreshing at the same time. These smoothies are free from sugar, which can make one wonder how they taste like as customers might imagine that they are not sweet as they are sugar-free. As a substitute for sugar, we use natural honey in the production process, making them sweet and healthy at the same time. Grab a smoothie is located in Houston and will offer quality healthy smoothies to its customers, and an ambient location for hanging around. The business will additionally provide fruits, vegetables, and a mixture of both in its menu. The restaurant will allow customers to choose which type of fruit and vegetable to include in their customized smoothies. Having healthy foods translates to healthy living that we are championing for among our population that is heavily afflicted.
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