Prevention of Illnesses is better than Treatment
- Introduction
Hook: What we eat and how we live determines the health status of our bodies.
General information about the topic: Currently, the global health sector is insisting more on the importance of disease preventive measures despite the improvement of treatment facilities and skilled health workers.
Thesis statement: Prevention of diseases is better than Treatment because it maximizes the chances of living a long life, minimizes healthcare expenses and enhances productivity in life.
- Body
- Topic Sentence: Preventing illnesses enhances a more extended living.
- Main Supporting Point reduces the risk of chronic
- Healthy diet
- Regular physical activities
- Main Supporting Point: vaccination against childhood diseases
- The reduced early mortality rate
- Elimination of communicable diseases and disability
- Main Supporting Point: Strong immune system
- Strong bones and muscles.
- Excellent psychological health.
- Topic Sentence: minimized healthcare expenses
- Main Supporting Point: Reduced number of hospital visits
- Elimination of transport costs
- Prevent hospital congestion
- Main Supporting Point: Lower consultancy and prescription costs
- Minimized chemical therapy
- Cutback on medicine cost
- Main Supporting Point: Minimal nursing expenses.
- Reduced hospital admissions
- Less clinic attendance
- Topic Sentence: Enhanced productive life.
- Main Supporting Point: Quality results in the workplace
- Minimal absenteeism in the workplace
- Teamwork and job specialization to increase quality production
- Main Supporting Point: Positive living in the family
- Happy and healthy relationships
- Family togetherness and support by all members
- Main Supporting Point: social and economic development in the country
- Encourages young adults education
- Promotion of the agricultural and tourism industries.
- Conclusion
Restate the thesis (using different words): Disease preventive measures are essential since they help to prolong human life, saves hospital and healthcare bills, and promote quality productive life.
Summarize the main points of the essay: Vaccination, strong immunity and minimized rate of chronic diseases lower the mortality rate. Illness prevention cuts back consultancy, prescription and nursing expenses. Disease prevention measures increase productivity in the family, workplace and nation-wide levels.
Make a final comment about the essay’s main idea: Prevention of diseases should be the primary goal for any individual.
Suggest an action that you would like the reader to take: Individuals should not only learn on the best infection prevention measures but also implement them for a healthy, long and productive life.