The Concepts of Renaissance Artists Scientists: The Mass Production of Knowledge
Part A Peer Response
Outstanding work! You have done an excellent job in explaining the contributions of the renaissance artists-scientists to human knowledge using mathematics. You have demonstrated proper use of evidence to support your argument of linear perspective as a renaissance concept. Your work is clear, as there is good development of paragraphs with a good explanation of events as they occurred. I like how you have explained other perspectives used by renaissance artist scientists in the second paragraph. I was moved by developments that have taken place due to mathematical principles. I love the way you have maintained a consistent tone within your paragraphs. Your definition of concepts is recommendable, as you have defined several concepts making it easy to understand them. I have enjoyed reading your work as you initially explained all events within a short article. I could not have done better as nothing more is needed. Regards!
Part B Peer Response
Excellent job! I like how you have answered the questions and supported your answers in explaining the technological advancements that led to the invention of printing by Gutenberg in the 15th century. Therefore, your paper is per required guidelines. In your post, you have clearly explained the events as they occurred after the introduction of Gutenberg’s printing. I am in complete agreement with your answers. I also like how well you have developed your sentences coherently, and you have a good arrangement of the paragraph making your work look great. Reasons why the Europeans rush to embrace the new technology after 1450 are well explained in the second paragraph. Your paper is great as it indicated your deep understanding of technological advancements in the 15th century. In the article, you have well cited your source. Conclusively, I want to say that I enjoyed reading your post, and it is remarkable. Good luck!